The mirror!

We have been learning how to do narratives on our Chromebooks. The one that I did was the mirror. What I like is when I got to describe the scary girl who had lots of blood dripping down. What I found hard was when I didn't now how to get the pitcher up on to my writing.what I want to work on is to get my capital letter's  in my writing, i'm going to read my story again to make sure I have capital letter's. Next time I would like to write a magic story about a stone that glows. What would you write about?

check out my writing below.

The mirror!

One day there lived a girl called Matilda who lived in a haunted house, there were lots of spider webs in the house.As she walks through the house, her hands were shaking,she was so nervous because it was so dark. There was a creepy spider who chased me ̈Aaaaaaaa!!!!¨  I said running away from the spider. The spider came out of the scary mirror. what I did is I chased the spider back into the mirror and I locked the mirror, as i lock it up I saw a girl in the mirror. She was wearing a gray top a black skirt and blue eyes.On the day matilda went up the stairs to the top of the house, she heard  a noise there was a creepy girl walking up to the top of the stairs,she didn’t notice me so I followed her. Matilda heard another noise, it was me I tripped on the ground and I didn’t know what to do, so then she looked at me and I screamed.She had blood dripping down from her face,the scary part was that she had no face.You could see her brains. So I ran away to the bottom of the stairs and i told my great nana . She said it is ok it is a prank. Lol I said. It was you the whole time. You must of got dressed fast then. Yes i did.

And that was the end of the story.