We are learning to write instructions. I did instructions about a paper dog. what I learned was when I have instructions they need to be numbered.
what we need in a instructions is: a goal/a tittle/a date/numbers/what you are doing.
What would you write about if you got to write instruction
how to make a paper dogGoal:Is to make a paper dog.
Things you need:
Some paper
Some coloured pens.
Some hands to make it.
Method:
- Get any colour piece of paper and make it into a triangle.
- Then cut the rest that you don’t need off.
- Fold the corners onto the piece of paper.
- Get any color you want like pink,blue,green and draw the face.
- How to draw the face. You need a pen so you can draw two circles on your face when you have done that draw one tiny dot in the middle of the eye then you have your two eyes.
- How to draw a mouth. So you need colour pen or a black pen and draw a medium circle and then add two lines down the side of the noise so you have your face.
- And that is the end of your learning.
Hi Paige, my name is Nevaeh from New Brighton catholic school.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you listed all the numbers and said how to do it and I would write how to do a cat I really enjoyed reading this.My feed back is to write the writing a little bit smaller. I would also want to know how it turned out like.