Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 5 June 2020
THE STORM!
write for enjoyment!
THE LIGHTING STORM!
One night a little boy went to play ball……. Then the LIGHTNING GOT HIM IN THE HEAD And the last minute he was lying on the ground DEAD! His mum got home she SCREAMS! DAD RUSH OUT (WHAT HAPPENED).........
COMMENT WHAT YA THINK WILL HAPPEN NEXT!!
PART TWO IS COMING SOON!
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My goodness Paige! I hope he's okay! What inspired you to write this story? I look forward to seeing part two. Miss Pownall
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